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A scene seems lively at its inception and you expect it to lose some of its punch in the repeated retelling, yet also in the repeated reading your imagination will break it down to the- Why is this happening? Why does the character bend the subject of conversation that way? -type of skepticism in the plot.
Maybe that's the purpose after all; a fresh look at motivation. That is when I ask myself, Wouldn't it be exciting.. type of question. Why would the friend suggest an affair? Why would the protagonist be sheepish in this scene?
Wouldn't it be exciting to just keep reading? That is the test of a great spec.